this week we have been working on a rubbish monster. i made a wanted poster about my monster and what he did to be wanted. my monster name is bandit Barry. bandit Barry is wanted for killing over a 1000 rats and digging a hole five meters deep. and he loves to eat fish and random plastic
is he scary?
did i do good?
would you find him for 67 000 000?
Kia ora Aria!
Your wanted poster for Bandit Barry is incredibly creative! I love the detailed drawing you made, especially his sharp teeth, his black bandana, and that spiky tail. The fact that he is wanted for digging a five-meter-deep hole and eating plastic makes him a very unique kind of rubbish monster!
The description of Bandit Barry loving to eat fish reminded me of a post I read earlier today where someone was talking about living in a submarine and eating lots of fish. It seems like Barry would fit right in under the sea. Maybe he could eat the plastic too!
I liked that you included lots of details like his description, his crimes, and the reward offered. Next time, maybe you could use a dark pen to outline your writing so the words are even easier to read.
He definitely looks a bit scary with those sharp nails, but you did an amazing job on this! I don’t think I’m brave enough to try and find him, even for 67,000,000!
Ngā mihi
Caroline
Hey Aria this is Ava ‘-‘ I love the 67 joke hehehehehe. he is scary and you did good.
hi aira lily here I just wanted to say your bandit bary poster is amazing
Hi Aria, I like your rubbish monster and the little face on it.